comment on anything boys n girls whether u fucken hate it or if u love it or maybe even like it a little just give me a heads up just so i can see wat i need to improve on

Im done I dun got any more ideas Once upon a time I had a sea of Meanings and deep feelings But people had to come and stick their feet in What they weren’t supposed to and stealing All my thoughts and concentration and beating Me to sht till all I had left were the things I was dreaming And you cant do that to somebody you cant only be mistreating They didn just take my hapinness they took my creative meaning They been eating , away at everything ive worked to become Some-one, notable in peoples eyes not just the corners shun A ton , of critisism not to end up with none O no but they haven fun , o freshy fresh the fat lady sung Im 90 % certain that all I wanna do is entertain But the offers I put out never been answeren Questionen every letter that I write, and every word that I strife To come up with every night, and every day Im a child is what they say “Fresh you only 15 wen u older ill holler a hey I may, let u stay, until late This industry isn’t for you fresh” even elders showen the hate But I dun give a shit ill keep tryen to write these papers cuz this the only way for me to escape Outta bad friends and bad girls, bad trends , and my bad worlds All this stress extends, and my physiological curls Fuck if these papers don’t help then I dun kno what does I always say us , becuz helpen these guys is a must A thrust into something that’ll never be but it’s a just Ill cuss till me n my guys get the stuff So fuck you and fuck the lust Of it all sht we gonna finish off dusty n crusty like Mr. fucking illustry

The streets here make u wanna show all kind of emotions Different people motions , midnight ho inns I was like dude gaturskian lotions Ha just the other day I saw a nigga kick a hoe’s shins A street fight every days a good show and Soccer games outside the coliseums main port and Crazy midnight murders on pain streets main seats are the daily reports and Thug life straight up hustlen at the communities airport and U can get 5 stars for less than $50 theres no resorten U better think twice about reporten This 20 star entertainment, I wanna see u try to turn your head and ignore this Haha mi colombia la tierra del mal Aqui venden la cocaine a 20% descuento a lado del mar Tienes pregunatas ? Ni las preguntes que te van a alzar Y te dan, habla publicamente y vez que te van a maltratar Preguntale a mari carr, que te calles la maldita boca te van a suplicar Te reccomiendo que ni mires a nadie que ni te van a hablar Da le 10 anos y te van a acabar Finish you off, every bit of you detoriate U feel fading away like some F- science experiment Everyone dipping their shit into you liked some fresh mixed cement Worn out, no one want you u like a legal astro’s roger clement You lament , but nothing gonna change lil annet Girl get the fuck outta here there aint no examples to set Run off before ozzy scream “Shannon” again Only 2 weeks left till I get my gift And listening to the radio play taylor swift And Ima learn to shift, gears at the DMV the 25th Ima learn if, finals is for reals or just a myth If I fail hey it’ll be the 5th One, but it definitely aint gonna be the last on the list son But I gota get outa here first huh ‘09s gone but ‘010s here It just took a second to end the decade aint it weird I left behind the failures and successes of the past year The mistakes and the actions of my physiological fear The smiles and the 11:59 pm tear My resolution ? Wise up, perk up, Take my girl back and pick her up Fresh always be tellen them to shut up

i can write something happy , enjoy u all =) Family comes first that’s what everyone says I love em to death but its all about my friends “pero amigos van y vienen” i could care less Try to get that through my parents physcological mess They had a biological fest, a chronological test They made us, they laid us, everywhere from east to west But the way we came out was just how they guessed , that’s what they says Fake a smile and a laugh and say you the best Or better off just pussy out like Mr. Kanye west That aint a friend but ima tell you who is I had a pretty lil friend by the name of liz Her attitude was more chill than the mountains Our secrets poured out like some fountains She helped me to develop by giving me hints Who helped me be who I is That’s why my heart never an empty trash bin I owe a lot to my other friend Eric That homie always made me follow the lyric Everything I’d do wrong he’d tear it Make it gud then he’d share it He taught me how to just bear it Tell em to fuck off and just take it I love him for all the opportunities he was maken I’d like to thank lizzy and Eric But I’d also like to thank nate nikka ivan and derrick

heres a gud one lost my girl 2 weeks before the big day for reasons that i cannot explain i was left stressed wit nothen to say a week away a see a blond so i say hey blah blah blah we maken out the chi-town way now she mad cuz i didn ask her to the big day she left me for reasons that now i can explain this time there was little pain this a story n rhyming this sht aint easy i aint no lil wayne it the big day and i decided to go alone i knew sht might go down but i never thought it was gonna be my own in my all white tux,attidude chill wit a face of stone this girl looked gorgeus i went in first i guess 3 hours of a mess - to be, i didn realize cuz i was haven a blast a fest completely, this only happens on the west side, but o well she was prob the best homecoming ends n monday was ackward the question i popped didn really shock her we was goin out n every night i talk to her my life was 100 % all of her i was bout 60 % full of her but her friends didn like me im sure =) we was doin halloween and this girl tell me she love me she the best i ever have so i let her be full of me oo you shoulda seen this bitch was looken lovely i leave that night wit my bag fulla candy i head to a party and danced and pulled an all nighty sht at 4 a.m. wit 4 pounds of candy in me i thot sht was dandy at this point she was for sure my sandy i call her at 5 and she answer crying she say she flirtd the sht outa my friend n said she aint lieyen i laughd n said i dun give a sht n so i hang up at nine and iwrote him one of these paper wit my ambtions shining he didn feel sht he just told me it was great n i was whining 2 days later me n her break up n guess who shes goin out wit now that same friend, and i asken myself how ?? i avoided her for 5 months after that but she wantd to talk to me now i gave in and we started talking again throughout all our talks i was strugglen i still loved her but i didn wanna tell her that i was shruggen her boyfriend striaght up hustler and muggen he didn give it to me easy he was always talken bout her,son he was always tellen me how she was the one homie i had 99 problems and a bitch was one they still together it seems like its been forever ive been waiting for it to end for forever so i can tell her i love her, like morever i dun wat to do people.,.,.,i kno its horrible

tryen to make it big in w.e. way i can i aint doin this alone ive been lent a hand my band, chocalate, k.g.s.v., and will.i.am and me fresh, we like some big fam- ily we gona rap it hard like the b.e. peas aint gona be no one hit wonder like the plain white tees cuz we more talented we also imaginatively famined but even if we run outta things to write our swag is straight up laminated, we fascinated my guys say we just opened the gates to sadville im just like chill the fuck out and swallow an advil my guys patience is running out they attitudes is starting to come out they wana diss me but they words wont come out we in this together we all runnen around tryen to get anything thatll help us surround ourselves with the least bit of amount of pride so we kno all this work aint just worthless sound we gonna hang in there till the end the 4 of us made a bet we tryen everything so we'd just like to thank songmeanings.net

born in the bad parts of l.a. to the bad parts of a laday no money for school, but hustlen hard is the l.a. way cuffs around your hands n the pretty orange suit bring the la shame so much for a job you be thinking that selling powders lame you dont got a choice, this shits a one man monopoly game a phalantropy shame there aint no one to blame open your eyes fool everything gonna look the same drop the pistol and hey...next time aim reflect on what your lifes been o yea ! one big yearly sin packing bags aint gona feed your chil-dren child services removed the middle-men all cuz of the ritalin ? o no not another riddle again kids..whats white n tall and aint gonna stop fiddelen? "fresh!!" no kids..but you jig-sawlen some of them boys wont stop signaling,with their hands again he wake up at 6 just like the day before he pick up a red bull down at the 24 he aint gota car which means he walk past the bball court he gets to the airport after sayen hey to the neighborhood whore but he still wants more,his girl say he can earn more money this the guy whos eyes light up when he gets tipped a 20 no education, no registration, no one secure station where he can stay, this f'er as poor as the south side astray jay-z got a state of mind , this dude just make sure he eat at 9 he cant whine, cuz his mind not really in a straight line haha u get it ? w.e. neithers mine ima end this paper cuz i aint got the time just know you can fix anything even if u as bad as freinkenstein

this was inspired by my guys all listed in the subject plz enjoy n comment on w.e. u feel needs to get better or watever else 4 a.m. i was walken down lincoln streets were wet theys was stirring and shaken ma clothes so fresh you could say i was mcbaken but if im not mistaken, you said i'd never make it ill tell you what im still awake and i feel so good im taking everyone off guard ima making history in the making haters still deny me they tripping and flaking they say im faking, yet im the ones with the homies funny aint it friday night we start to feel the sleeze you say we got no where to go homie please we hit up BK,TB,KFC, n the mcdees that shit felt better than feeling better at lapi's straight up the lincolnhood home of the crackies homie that shit more fucked than the marleys you be a losing record just like the marlins our presence is felt everywhere we go looken good from head to toe looken fresh from high to low black lids, black shades, black kicks, black chicks our swag so fresh we reinvented the word cliques anyone messen wit us goin down like the new york knicks we dun even need this

ey i got nothing against white people or anyone at all i just wrote this as a joke towards this one kid that fit the description of this rapp perfectlyy it was made for him and not towards anyone else so plz enjoyyy freshh being freshh laceless shoes and v-neck tees skin tight pants are those $100 lees flip that wood with the slightest of ease then watch tv like skee tv you living the life of a typical white boy you failing at life like a traditional black boy your teachers say to pay attention either way you gonna end up in detention you swearing in class gonna fuck up the tension for the 3rd time you repeating 10th grade you're heading towards a 4th one, straight up slim shade you wana drop out, straight up lil wayne you turn to your rock band, straight up jim wade chug that booze and snort that bud pass out at midnight in your friends bathtub wake up at daylight at your schools mathclub move outta our house your parents are urging you gonna live lonlier than the 40 year old virgen you striking out, looks like the fire turned to ice noone wants you, you go from urban meyer to charlie weis, haha

this is what happens when u get suspended for 5 days and grounded wit absolutely nothing to do wat do u do ? u write the bored anthem haha enjoy this really aint what i expected 3 days n counting ive been reflecting a year n a half ive been selecting do i feel threatened? nah i feel tested what useful things have i been doing the same thing lions fans been booing, at, nothing they sucking,we know they just motherfucking stop fucking they might get lucky taking out the trash,eating my stash playen my p.s. and watchen steve nash now nine is when i crash can't get some T.B. cuz i aint got no cash them cars expecting a gud car wash yea right, those fuckers gonna die dusty in the gar-age dirty n dusty they b hoping for a mir-age ping-pongs at the wall,sliding down the hall living room sofa cart-wheels, playen dining room table navy-seals eating nonstop, thats where the funstop peeling them stickers, there go my snickers getting dunked on by patrick chewing, getting hated by j.j. lewing just started the 3rd season of phantom, nigga this the bored anthem