I'm Grant, and I am currently working on some lyric writing for my band. Help a brotha out. Comment on my shit like you would a real song, these are all first drafts of groups of lyrics that I think have potential to become full songs. I've got a progressive/hardcore/electronica band. Right now the band name is between Voison and Viosin. Comment on that. Haha, if you want to know more just ask, if my shit seems random just ask me, it's all got meaning. I'll post stuff as I deem good enough. Hahaha. Thanksss. =)

I wanna touch you But I know that I'm wrong Or maybe I'm not And I've been right all along Surrounded by liars The truth lies in my head If I'm really in love with a ghost Then I'm better off dead So baby, take me take me Take me away from this mess Each blink of those pretty eyes Counts the beats in my chest One look at the light makes me afraid of the dark I'm only living for the next glimpse of a spark I can only wait here so long Before the fire burns out and all hope is gone So I'll keep following this dark without a clue I'll take my last breath before I give up on you

I sit here in this room None of these ghosts ever get tired As my life goes by too soon The emptiness fills this cage like fire You sit on my left All dressed in gold I can't hear your whispers but they strike like screams The words are much clearer when they haunt me in my dreams Like an angel with the touch of your hand The wait for salvation will not let me stand Breath from your lips, I live off the air Heavier now, you can't hear the cries Closer, I need you, I need air My hopes die, from your stare Closer, I need you, I need air I need your lies If you fall.. I'll surely die

You'll never see this. None of you ever will. The hidden killer on my shoulders, is digging through my head. Struggling to survive, it knows I'm better off dead. It's in my head again, my mind isn't right. Kill the messenger, she'll put up no fight. The poison locked inside my brain is leaking onto the floor. The escape I've been looking for is just another locked door. The fire on the outside is harmless, While the smoke is suffocating me within. Each inhale fills my lungs with regret. Trapped in my chest, I choke on it. (Screams) (Enter Chorus) Tell me tell me your sweet lies, that curved blade only gets longer Every word like a knife in my ear only serves to make me stronger Masked by the illusion of invincibility, can't see the visions of the Real. My world is shattered by Paris's arrow through my heel. Let the pieces rain down. (Breakdown) The hero always drowns. I walk on fucking water. Who the fuck do you think you are? I've taken your crown. Hypnotised by this sound. I feel these demons all around. (Out of Breakdown) Ohh the strings of anarchy are pulling harder The burden of society on your back is forever bound The strings of anarchy are pulling you farther Ohh where is your God to cut them down? The demons are getting closer. Burning your reality to the ground. Within your soul lies your true savior. Where is your God to save you now? (Verse 2) Get me away from this hell Save my spirit with the ring of bells Take me away on a chariot of flames My face painted red, I'll carry the reins I drink in water, but cough out ice Surrounded by fire, but frozen inside Break me down Put the fires out (Fuckin Chorus) Tell me tell me your sweet lies, that curved blade only gets longer Every word like a knife in my ear only serves to make me stronger Masked by the illusion of invincibility, can't see the visions of the Real. My world is shattered by Paris's arrow through my heel. (Add Variation To 2nd Brige) Ohh the strings of anarchy are pulling harder The burden of society on your back is forever bound The strings of anarchy are pulling you farther Ohh where is your God to cut them down? The demons are getting closer. Burning your reality to the ground. Within your soul lies your true savior. Where is your God to save you now?

Don't look down Keep on walking forward Don't look back No one's coming for you Don't look down The water's rising faster Don't look up The end is raining down Drowning Drowning in your own self repentance Hating every contest with your dry reflection So lock all your doors, stay away from the light Board up the windows, it's coming tonight Don't run, don't hide, accept your demise Your fate was sealed in this body of lies There is no seeing through this Yet the walls are so clear I can only look in from the outside I'll get to you somehow, dear! Don't come looking when I'm gone You'll never find me, You'll never find me This life we hate is so long So why don't you love a little baby Keep the gun at my head Fucking shoot, Fucking shoot it sweetie This world won't even know that I'm dead But I know you won't forget me These chills run down my spine But the real motives all mine Surrounded by demons But they're all afraid of me If only you could see me now But you can only see so far We're all blind anyway So come with me into the dark Don't come looking when I'm gone You'll never find me, You'll never find me This life we hate is so long So why don't you love a little baby Keep the gun at my head Fucking shoot, Fucking shoot it sweetie This world won't even know that I'm dead But I know you won't forget me My eyes are stained With the mess that marked your pain I can't stay long, girl, the next test awaits I keep on moving forward Standing in the same place The light I keep moving toward The reflection off your face Fucking shoot it Fuckin let it go I'm not who you think I am I'm who you make yourself believe You're no saint, but you're so beautiful baby Such a waste Such a life to take (Breath/Piano Breakdown) I'm the lock you'll never break. Keep the gun at my head Fucking shoot, fucking shoot it sweetie If you think I've given up, then you're dead already The life we hate is so long Why don't you love a little baby? Lock me in this cell And throw away the key But these walls can't hold me in You'll never stop me Take those four words Shove them down your throat I can walk on water So baby burn the boat (Crazy MotherHOLYSHITfucking Bridge) ....(Beautiful Piano) Take a look down this scope And see the man you thought you knew This is your final hope Make sure they don't forget you