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    by TS on September 28, 2007
    Cut to- Dim room A medium built man lays on the bed, Jake, sprawled out, with a 5th of vodka half empty and 8 empty pill bottle laying next to him, this room is filled with, a bed, a computer desk with an old computer on top of it, playboy’s open and closed all over the floor, a dresser with the drawers hanging open and clothes coming out of them, clothes all over the floor, pill bottles stacked nicely in a pyramid on the dresser, Jack Daniels and vodka bottles all over the room, the camera zooms in on him, he starts flinching, as if he is having a bad dream, it gets closer and closer on his face, he starts twitching harder and harder, the camera fades out Cut to-a bar Jake is standing next to a very large biker guy with a beer in hand, they are arguing Jake Fuck you asshole, you no good piece of shit. Bartender Jake, calm it down or your gonna be thrown out Biker No, no, no, I want to see what this prick thinks he can do Jake I can fucking beat your ass that’s for sure. Jake slams the beer bottle on the table breaking it and swings it backwards at the biker. The large man catches his arm just before it hits his forehead, he twist his arm upward and knocks Jakes feet out from under him, sending him strait to the ground, On his way down, Jake hit another person standing behind him, that person turns around and punches the biker right in the face knocking him into two other people, causing a full bar riot, Jake is trying to get up, but keeps getting kicked back down, till a nerdy looking man grabs him, and pulls him up Ryan Come with me Jake Where Ryan Come on, The two of them run out of there, just as the police are swinging around the corner, they both bail. Cut to-a bus stop The two guys sit down and the man starts to explain Ryan First off, Jake… Jake How do you know me? What the fuck is going on man Ryan Shut up, if it weren’t for me, you would be dead or on your way to jail. As I was saying, my name ‘s Ryan. You, you just about got yourself caught, the police are al over you dude. Jake What the fuck did I do? Ryan I was getting to that. Ryan pulls out a newspaper article folded up in his pocket Ryan Look and see for yourself kid Jake (Reading out loud) “Conspiracy suspect, not in custody.” (He looks up at Ryan) What does that mean Ryan You don’t know, we have been using you since this corporation started kid. Jake Wait one fucking second here; using me, corporation, what the fuck are you talking about, what the fuck did you get me into. Ryan Ok, here it is, and this is going to piss you off, we have been following you, tracking you, figuring out where you go, what you do, and even what you eat, we used the information to make a, guy, if you will. That can act exactly like you, well about a month ago, it decided it wanted out, and we were gonna kill him, rather than letting him walk, but he escaped, since he has been working with a terrorist organization, but the problem is, he knows how to make it look, Jake Like I did it, what about the forensics in that stuff, finger prints, DNA, the whole bit, Ryan That’s all great and wonderful; accept he knows your social security number, your license plates number, your car model, he can make it look like you did it kid, and as for DNA, he should have no problem there. Jake Why Ryan When we were following you, any swab of saliva, blood, anything you spilled, we were on top of, cups, smokes, anything. So he has many ways to mock your DNA Jake Fuck you man, you guys came into my life, and framed me, and now you want to be buddy’s, FUCK YOU!!! Ryan stands up and looks at Jake Ryan Fall Jake What Ryan grabs Jake and throws him about 4 feet up in the air, just as he is about to hit the ground, camera cuts back to him laying in the bed, his eyes shoot open. He sits up, hung over, and groggy, he stands up. Cut to- Jake’s kitchen There is trash all over the floor, the trash can is over flowing, the oven door is open, Jake walks over to the fridge and opens it, all you can see inside, is beer orange juice, old milk, and a single hot dog, he grabs the beer. Jake It was a dream right? He looks around when Ryan’s voice is heard inside his head Ryan O.C. Was it? Jake HEY! Where the fuck are you, leave me alone, I want nothing to do with it!! Cut to- Street Jake walks down the street, in a large group of people, Ryan O.C. Be careful, you don’t want to get caught, Jake does a quick 180 to see if Ryan is standing anywhere close to him. Ryan O.C. You won’t be able to find me. Unlike you, I stay under the radar Jake looks around some more trying to find him, he can’t so as to not look crazy, he reaches in his pocket and grabs a cell phone, he holds it up to his head. Jake Where the fuck are you. (He gets no response) Jake Come on, down get quiet now, where are you tough guy. Ryan O.C. If you want to see me, go to sleep, I will wake you. Jake I still have a life, come on out, don’t be Mr. Shy now. Ryan O.C. Ya know, the people around you think you are really gay now, that sounded so gay. Jake Shut up Cut to- Jakes room Jake walks in, sits on the bed, and looks around for a the right pill bottle, he picks up six empty ones and throws them before coming to one that has a few in it, it he pops all 5 or 6 strait from the bottle, and washes it down with some Jack, he drinks the Jack like it’s apple juice. Cut to- his kitchen He pulls a beer out of the fridge, pops the tab, and chugs it down, he starts walking back towards the room, but trips on the trash, he falls and struggles to get back up, he crawls most the way back to his room, where he throws himself into bed, and passes right out, in a flash Jake open’s his eyes, he is in his room, but it is very clean with a new computer, nice pictures on the wall, and he is dressed in nice street clothes, he walks out to his kitchen where it is also very clean, no trash, table cleared, he opens his fridge and sees it is fully stocked, he shuts it. Ryan walks out from behind him; Jake does not know he is there. Ryan Nice place (Jake jumps) Jake Ok, what the fuck do you want from me. Ryan Ok, if you want to live, and not go to jail, you will come with me. Cut to- a very living room There is a big screen TV, a conference room to the right, a large dining room to the left, a couple couches, and many people inside, they all pause as Jake and Ryan walk through the door. Ryan Here, come on in, I have some people to introduce you to. He walks up to a man smoking by the stairs. Ryan Jake this is TJ. T.J., you know who this is. TJ Nice to meet you in person man, sorry for the inconvenience. Jake Yeah Ryan Ok, and to our left here we have the very adorable, Lindsey Lindsey Awe, Ryan, how do I resist you. Ryan I never said you had to, moving on, over here we have… Lindsey The poor guy looks freaked out to hell, I should show him around. Jake Ok Ryan Very well, I will meet you back here in ten Lindsey That guy Ryan is an asshole, he thinks cause he started this corporation, he can control al of us, well I am not one to take orders from no one. Jake What is the point of this corporation? Lindsey This place was started to help the homeless, but we started running out of cash, we tried to get government help, but they saw no profit in a homeless corporation, so they turned us down, so Ryan told us, that we could rise, overthrow the ruling, and turn this country into a better place, but our last headquarters got raided, they had the swat team, FBI, national guard, the whole thing, they came in and started open firing, we fought back, but were out numbered, we took many down, but it wasn’t enough, Ryan grabbed 4 people out of there, and let the rest go down for him. No one even knows his last name, cept his best friend; TJ and me were two of the people he grabbed Jake Well, if you guys hate it here, why don’t you quit? Lindsey Cause now we are after something better, Ryan had to change things around after we got caught, we are going to over throw the white house, what we are doing is getting homeless people, who just want a break, we are feeding them clothing them, giving them home, here at this place, and once we get a grand army, we are going to expand, and get more stations all over this country, then eventually go for Mexico, once we have 5000 people who will fight on our side, we are going to raise money, get guns and vest and the whole thing, and we are going to storm the white house, and once we get it broken down, the pentagon is next. Jake So you actually believe that he can pull this off. Lindsey Not really, but I can see that the intentions are good, and I would rather be part of something working for good, than paying taxes to a system I don’t believe in. Jake You don’t pay Taxes Lindsey As far as they know, we don’t even exist, see, that is where you came into this, we needed to find some one as like, a dummy, someone to get the focus off, we got one guy to train to be just like you, but when it came down to time to go he flaked out, Ryan had orders to kill, but he escaped, and now he is trying to bury us alive, and doing a good job to, there go if you had gotten caught, we would have no more leads at where he is, and he would get off Scot free. Jake So if you guys are spending money left and right on homeless people, where is the money coming in? Lindsey Ryan got a huge inheritance, so he goes off that for the most part, but other than that, he sells. Jake Oh, (a beat) sells what Lindsey Drugs silly Jake Oh (a beat) WHAT!! Lindsey Calm down kid, we only sell to big times, regulars, not any random person, but we make huge buck on it Jake Anyways, I think, lets get this tour finished up here They walk up to a guy lying on the couch Lindsey This is Kevin, he was the first homeless person we got, he has made quite a reputation for himself, Kevin Well, I learned a long time ago that if you want to make it in the world, you have to let every one know you mean business, accept your boss, than you get fired and end up, well you know They start walking towards the stairs when Lindsey sticks her foot out and pushes Jake over it, he starts to fall and just before he hits the ground, he wakes up in his room, a mess as usual, he sits there for a second making faces of confusion, he grabs is head Jake AWE!!! He stands up Cut to-restaurant Jake and a girl friend, Alex, sit across from each other, only drinks on the table Alex You’re an alcoholic, you need help Jake It is more than that, it’s not just the alcohol, these dreams, there like, better than real life, I enjoy them, and when I wake up, I see how bad my life really is Alex Jesus Christ, you know why we broke up, Jake Cause my best friend was well hung and I wasn’t, yeah, I don’t need to hear that one again. Alex No, cause I couldn’t take all the drinking, all the pills, all the misery, you need help, and won’t take it, I couldn’t sit and watch you waste your life away anymore. Jake Well here you are Alex I can leave if you’d like Jake NO! Please, don’t go. Alex Jake, I can smell alcohol on you now, you been drinking today already. Jake That is how I go to sleep. Alex starts to stand up Jake Wait, where are you going Alex Away Jake, away, I can’t take seeing someone I care about this much destroy themselves this much, you aren’t going to make it to 30 if you keep it up Jake Alex, I love you, I want you back, but I can’t stop, less I know that anything good will come out of it Alex Than you don’t want me that bad Jake I do Lindsey O.C. What do you see in her, I am way hotter Jake immediately starts looking around Alex What are you looking for? Jake goes for the cell phone thing again Jake Where are you? Lindsey Right where I need to be, in bed, and I think you should join me, but you have to go to sleep first, I will come to you. Jake Ok, (He hangs up the phone) I have to go Alex (Sighs) why, who was that, Jake A business client, I just, I have to go. Jake gets up and starts running down the road, the gets home, and hit the bottles just as before, he gets in bed, and lays there, but doesn’t pass out, he tosses and turns, but nothing, he sprawls out but nothing Jake I just take more, He shuffles around and finds another bottle; he slams the pills and takes the jack down. Btu still nothing, so he gets up, and throws himself around, he runs head first into his dresser, he falls backwards, out cold Cut to- the mansion Jake is in a very dark room hear people outside the room, but does not know where he is, he gets up and pokes his eyes in the crack in the door to see what is outside Lindsey Where ya going, I do believe your stuck here now, Jake What do ya mean? Lindsey Jake let me tell you a quick truth, this corporation is real, I am real, but you are not, you are a lucid dream, do ya know what that means Jake Dreaming that you control, Lindsey That’s right, but you are going to need to know what is going on when you finally end up here, so we kind of found a way into your subconscious, and you are seeing every thing, so, better learn while you have time, and right now you do. Cut to- Jake’s room Jake lays with his head in a puddle of blood from his head, Alex walks in, she grabs him and shakes him around for a sec than pulls out his phone and calls 911 Cut to- the dark room Jake So if this is lucid, than I am in control Lindsey Kind of, I am not gonna sleep with you if that is what you think, but, you don’t feel pain, but here is the thing, we need you to find us in the real world, or we will find you. Jake What do you need form me? Lindsey I can’t say, but we do. Cut to- Jakes house The ambulance doors slam shut, and it rolls away Cut to- the mansion Lindsey and Jake walk out of the bedroom and Ryan is their waiting, Ryan Jake nice to have you on board, Jake walks up to Ryan and slaps him with a backhand, Ryan isn’t fazed, but every one in the mansion looks up in silence. Ryan looks very deep at Jake, than swings a strait punch, and knocks Jake down, Ryan climbs on top of him and starts kicking the crap out of him, beating him senseless, every one walks over as he lets jake get up, just to knock him bad into the people in a circle, they throw him back in, Cut to- the hospital Jake lays in his bed, and starts twitching all over the place, like he is having a seizure, the doctors rush in Cut to-fight scene Jake lays face down as Ryan grabs a chimney rod, and starts whacking him in the head with it, Lindsey runs up to Ryan, and grabs the rod as he swings down Lindsey Enough! Ryan Get the fuck off me, I will teach this fucking ingrate to think before he swings. Lindsey Don’t you think maybe he got the picture. Right then Jake storms Ryan’s legs, taking him down, he gets on top, blood drips onto Ryan, the just starts swinging as fast and as hard as he can on Ryan’s face, Lindsey grabs the poker, and sticks it in Jakes back, it shocks him, he reaches his arm around and grabs it, he sees it and uses the butt end of it to whack strait into Ryan’s nose, being the final blow of the fight, he stands up, Cut to- E.R. A doctor walks out to see Alex in the waiting room, Alex So is he gonna be ok. Doctor There is no telling, he is in a coma state right now, he is showing a very weird case though, ya see he was ok, but went into a seizure and started bleeding from the mouth, he is stable right now, if you would like to go see him Alex Ok, just give me a minuet, I’ll be right in there The doctor gets up and walks away, after a beat, Alex starts walking towards the room, but stops after a step and walks out the door Cut to- the mansion Ryan sits on the stairs next to Jake Jake I don’t get it, I felt to pressure of getting hit, but not the pain, I should have been out cold after the first hit Ryan It is all a dream, but you are stuck now. Jake Why do you guys keep saying that, can’t I just fall and wake up, like every other time, Ryan Go for it Jake runs up the stairs, he climbs over the edge, the camera views the ground and Jake falls strait down hits and just sits there Jake Hmm, ok, well that did not go as planned, Ryan I told you, you’re stuck in now. Jake Why Ryan You took it over board getting here. Jake AWE SHIT! So, I’m like in a coma, or something. Ryan Something like that, so you mitas well get comfortable, Jake So if this is a dream, I can do anything, I am in command, is that what I am hearing? Ryan Don’t get to ahead of yourself here, you can die, just remember that Jake How can I die, if it’s all a dream, than it is not real, Ryan But your brain is battling itself right now, if you over do it, it will just shut down, and you will never wake up, you will be a vegetable. Jake Fuck that man, check this out, Jake walks up the door, open’s it, and walks out, he shuts the door behind him than appears behind Ryan Jake I am in control, SWEET! Ryan Like I said, don’t over do it, plus we have work to do, we have to catch this guy making you look guilty
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  • guilty conscience... rate my songs just like the o

    by TS on May 30, 2007
    .................................GIVE ME A BREAK.................. your not as happy asyou seem to be when your alone do you cry to me let me take away the pain soon you'll no longer be sain every day I think as I wake oh please god just give me a break out in the open I see your fine you say you love me that you're all mine you cant bottle it all up in side you can not run you can not hide trust me babe it is all for your sake oh please god just give me a break C/why do you lock feelings away H/I could help you,love you every day O/give me the key R/so your heart wont ache U/oh please god S/just give me a break neutral ground might be just swell tell me all there is to tell was it your dad or abusive guys can you stand living all your lies here babe my heart is for take just please god give me a break ....CHORUS.... you dont need a ring see what I'm offering yeah this flame could grow grand take my love hand in hand we'll sleep now but when we wake you must please babe just give me my break ....CHORUS.... tell me what you think and I see you with a new song my band is called guilty conscience and we do do origanals only
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