OK, so I wrote a song. And I like it. It's the first successful attempt I've made at writing a song with music and lyrics. And I think it sounds pretty good. I'm just wondering, are the lyrics too cliche? I don't know. I'm starting to think it's an overused theme. Love compared to a drowning. Love compared to sailing. The whole water theme. I'm just not sure. If I wanna be a singer-songwriter, I'm gonna need a style. "Drowning In You" Your eyes are oceans that I'm sailing through Drifting deep in your expanse of blue Searching for familiar things but it's all new I'm drowning in you I'm drowning in you [Chorus] The undertow of you heart is Dragging me down And the more I try to resist this The faster I drown I wanna turn around But it's too late now I'm drowning in you I'm drowning in you Your smile's a sea of the mystery inside Revealing secrets you were trying to hide I'd like to explore your shores if you don't mind I'm drowning in you I'm drowning in you [Chorus] Your hands are rivers flowing across my skin Telling tales of their travels, and where they've been Only now do I remember...I can't swim I'm drowning in you I'm drowning in you [Chorus]