• ever since i met you
  i wanted the world to hear you
  the price, i thought, was that you never would be fully mine
  this klaxon cried "look here and listen"
  that's a definite form of devotion
  i know you didn't ask me, but i took it as my mission
  
  sometimes blessed, sometimes cursed
  alternately best and worst
  but now i'll take what's mine
  as i remember how to shine

• Good rhythm and flow in these lines.

  NomadMonadon August 24, 2019   Link

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• Thank you. Just here, nowhere else really

  artemisagroteraon August 13, 2019   Link

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    I forgot how to delete incorrectly threaded comments, oh well

    artemisagroteraon August 13, 2019  

• it's called "collaboration" because half of this is cribbed/revised from a friend

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    I like this. Do you post your work online anywhere?

    NomadMonadon August 06, 2019  

    Thank you. Just here, nowhere else really

    artemisagroteraon August 13, 2019  

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