• Taken down

  Crushed

  Ground into dust

  Clawing through sadness

  No strength to feel lust

  I despise feeling numb

  No penalty's worse

  I'll trot out that cliche 

  and climb into this hearse

  Take me somewhere

  So I don't have to care

  I no longer come on command

  I might see the door

  I could maybe forget

  If my body'd obey my hand

  The force of the vortex 

  Threatens to drown

  It's a shame this shell goes to waste

  I wish you were free

  But you're not

  It's too bad

  'cause I just want to give you a taste

• There is good rhyme and rhythm in this one.
  Bleak - but interesting poetry.

  NomadMonadon September 26, 2016   Link

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• high and drunk

  
  

  wrote this in ten minutes

  
  

  apologies for banality

  artemisagroteraon January 29, 2015   Link

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