• Hello, i am a fifteen year old misfit, and i cry myself to sleep.

  i starve myself dayly, but you will never see me weap.

  when all you see is smiles, im dying deep inside.

  the blood ive shed at night, rusn a mile wide.

  you say its just for fun, she doesnt care.

  but if you push to far, i will snap, so beware.

  im bleeding and ive lost the will to stay alive

  but i know that this isn't my last "goodbye"

• I like the rhyme and structure of this poem. Keep writing.

  
  

  April is National Poetry Writing Month you know.

  
  

  http://connecthook.wordpress.com/2014/03/31/poetry-on-draft/

  
  

  It's soon to be Resurrection Sunday.

  
  

  Seek God and believe the Gospel.You only have one life.

  
  

  (unless you actually LIKE cutting, anorexic tendencies, being depressed, etc...)

  NomadMonadon April 19, 2014   Link

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    A lot of Christians experience depression too. Not that you ddnt make a good recommendation. & as usual, a call for seeking God always makes you sound like a callous ignorant cock.

    leavesintheriveron April 20, 2014  

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