ABBA 1976

  • I tried to tighten up my ABBA poem -
    but I’m not sure if the 10-syllable per line version works as well.
    Can anyone offer feedback?

    Glimmerings of ABBA

    Fantasy turned blonde  in ‘seventy-six.
    Bjorn, Benny and the flikas ruled the West.
    Santa Lucia never shone so blessed
    as she did in my private Euro-mix.
    Perfect pop longs for that feminine fix.
    Cassette wheels whirred –  branding, then impressing
    grooves upon the brain; my thrall confessing
    love for Nordic light (in Disco metrics).
    The names still strike flames, kindling bright renown:
    I Do… (times fiveand will forevermore).
    Those Viking faces sacked my harbor town.
    Frida, Agnetha  –  your longships linger
    portaging hope to this shipwrecked singer,
    enwreathing smiles to reach our further shore.

    [original version):

    Emerging global fantasies turned blonde for me in ‘seventy-six.
    Bjorn, Benny and the flikas sailed the radio waves from East to West.
    Santa Lucia’s crowning princess never shone so blessed
    on midnight pines as she did in my private Eurovision-mix.
    Perfect pop intensifies the longing for that feminine fix.
    Cassette wheels whirred – first branding, finally impressing
    deep grooves upon the brain; my pre-pubescent thrall confessing
    helpless love for Nordic light (in thumping Disco metrics).
    The names still hum, strike flames, kindle bright renown:
    Bang a Boomerang, SOS, I Do, I Do, I Do, I Do, I Do (and will forevermore).
    Those Viking visages sacked and razed my little harbor town.
    Frida Lyngstad, Agnetha Fältskog  –  your longships linger
    syllables flicker, portaging hope to every shipwrecked singer
    Enwreathing smiles in evergreens to reach our further shore.

    http://connecthook.wordpress.com/2013/11/30/

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