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  You’re fucking up!
  You should have tried harder.
  Don’t be so needy!
  Don’t be so sad!
  
  You’re a piece of shit.
  They think so, too.
  Who? Well, everyone!
  Even your friends hate you.
  
  Don’t bite your lip!
  You look so nervous!
  I bet everyone knows that you’re scared.
  
  Stop it! Stop it all!
  You’re gonna fuck up again!
  Then again, that’s all you are.
  A lonely fuckup.
  
  You annoy everyone,
  They just don’t say so.
  You’re so awkward,
  You should just go
  
  Hide behind your computer screen
  No one knows you there
  No one knows how shitty you are
  Nor do they care

• Nice poetry dude !
  I was deceived by the form - I thought it implied function. Then I realized that your quatrains weren't even rhymed and were interspersed with triplets.

  
  

  More power to you, brother!

  
  

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  NomadMonadon May 17, 2013   Link

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