Lyric discussion by dragon4625 

Cover art for Spill the Wine lyrics by Eric Burdon & the Animals

spill the wine, enjoy your pleasures carefree. also,sufism, "stain your prayer mat with wine (anathema). if you dont get it, then eat my shit you dumm amaerican motherfuckers

My Interpretation

Okay. A couple of things.

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  • You are missing several spaces in your sentence structure.
  • You're missing periods in spots where they are necessary, which means you have run-on sentences.
  • You spelled dumb and American wrong. Who is dumb now? I'm pretty sure you just trolled yourself.
  • You are missing several spaces in your sentence structure.
  • You're missing periods in spots where they are necessary, which means you have run-on sentences.
  • You spelled dumb and American wrong. Who is dumb now? I'm pretty sure you just trolled yourself.
  • absolutely right, thanks for the feedback. i like "trolled", will look it up,though i think i get the picture!