Lyric discussion by Imposs1ble 

Cover art for Lost Coastlines lyrics by Okkervil River

I hate to nitpick, but these three things need to get fixed:

  1. key = quay
  2. proud = prow
  3. may lay = melee

Are those changes that you suggested that have already been made? Or are you saying that quay should be changed to key, etc? If the latter is the case you're wrong about all three.

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