Just a few of my own suggestions here:
Second verse I think begins 'You always run' instead of 'And when you run'
In the 'chorus' bit:
'Pull it up And steer it up This game is over'
I think there should be another line before that last one:
'Pull it up And steer it up I can't relax This game is over'
And also I would change the verse:
'You're taking all You thought was wrong You used to follow lyrics Of your favorite song'
To:
'You've taken all You thought was wrong You used it for the lyrics Of your favorite song'
Just a few suggestions, no idea if they're right :)
Great song btw, I personally think this band deserves way more publicity than it gets.
Just a few of my own suggestions here:
Second verse I think begins 'You always run' instead of 'And when you run'
In the 'chorus' bit:
'Pull it up And steer it up This game is over'
I think there should be another line before that last one:
'Pull it up And steer it up I can't relax This game is over'
And also I would change the verse:
'You're taking all You thought was wrong You used to follow lyrics Of your favorite song'
To:
'You've taken all You thought was wrong You used it for the lyrics Of your favorite song'
Just a few suggestions, no idea if they're right :)
Great song btw, I personally think this band deserves way more publicity than it gets.