"And I'd like to look you up, But you couldn't tell when would be a good time to visit, There ain't no better time than now."
should be
"And I should look you up when i come to town, when would be a good time to visit? There ain't no better time than now."
"And I'd like to look you up, But you couldn't tell when would be a good time to visit, There ain't no better time than now."
should be
"And I should look you up when i come to town, when would be a good time to visit? There ain't no better time than now."